Delta-9's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[da elf that kills himself]

yeah that darkness halfway through....

....thats called an ending. i thought that you put a black screen in the middle, hlafway through. so i sat there like an idiot listeneing to a song that is only cool in conjunction with the animation... NOT a black screen. so do us a favor and write the end after you give up finishing you projects. graphically though i liked yuor movie. not all of the images seemed relevent but there was a consistency and a flow. the music was cool but like i said before when played with the animation. finish it.

[SPIRITUAL]

vote this higher

this guy is on crack and we need to support his habbit with 5ers. but seriously he has an interesting design style and it goes really well to the music. i dont think much was repeated either. it did go on a little long though. but it was entertaining. kind of reminded me of a fanimutation or animutation whatever the Fck those are anywys.

[Monkey Man 1]

its really more like a 3 1/2

anyhow that was funny when the monkey was like "fear not women...." and he was humping her! what a perv. anyhow this seriously needs sound. also work on the drawings a little bit and the animation a little bit. for example when the woman was lying there unconscious, you might want to make her body look like it was limp not all stiff with her arms up in fright. when the monkey was bouncing off of walls make him extend his body like superman. you know, different poses to make it look more fluid. what i did like was that scene where you see the monkeys face and the clown is bashing him and he grabs his hand and whoops his ass with the other one

[Addiction]

have you ever done drugs?

it was kind of touching but the "i miss you blah blah blah" just was over the top. perhaps you can find a way of showing that without saying it.

[A Timeless Heart]

kind of twisted

pretty dark. hitlers voice didnt seem to fit but i grew to like it. and the ending left me confused. confused as to your intention. but confused in a good way. good job

[skittles commercial]

ummm

i think if you wanted to parody those skittles commercials you should have tried to emulate them more. they had a more mystical feeling to them, maybe incorporate the same music as found in the commercials. i dunno, just my oppinion.

also counter strike noises are not good to use for skittles striking people in the head

night-raider responds:

i wasnt trying to capture the magic of skittles. i was trying to exploit the deadlyness of skittles. also i couldnt find any skittle like noises for people getting killed. thank u 4 ur honesty.

[(2003)Bored Bombers]

this isnt your best work

i think you make good work but this one wasnt the best.

the explosion consisting of a fade to white screen was a little weak

im not trying to flame you just my honest criticism

also i think it time you step up the models you are working with, you have used the same blue blob-like men for the last several animations and i think it would be cool if you could start sculpting them with more detail

also you can construct mini sets out wood or styrofoam

now that you have a handle on the medium its time to see how you push it

Knox responds:

hmmmm interesting!